In my writing I had to notice the structure. We had to make a descriptive piece of writing to describe or summer by adding all kinds of interesting verbs, nouns and adjectives. Then we had to edit and recraft. I think that I did well with the structure. In my story I thought that I didn’t really add many detail so next time I will try to add more detail.
Kia Ora Sam. My name is Reilly and I am from Grey Main School. I really like the detail of your writing. Where is this place you are talking about? Bye for now.
ReplyDeleteHey Sam. Was this the beach you were at? Lucky you mate. I enjoyed your Summer story and how you reflected on the way you had written it. Good job, and I look forward to seeing you blog more of your learning this year. Cheers Chris
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