Friday, February 17, 2017

I Remember

In my writing I had to notice the structure.  We had to make a descriptive piece of writing to describe or summer by adding all kinds of interesting verbs, nouns and adjectives.  Then we had to edit and recraft. I think that I did well with the structure. In my story I thought that I didn’t really add many detail so next time I will try to add more detail.


  1. Kia Ora Sam. My name is Reilly and I am from Grey Main School. I really like the detail of your writing. Where is this place you are talking about? Bye for now.

  2. Hey Sam. Was this the beach you were at? Lucky you mate. I enjoyed your Summer story and how you reflected on the way you had written it. Good job, and I look forward to seeing you blog more of your learning this year. Cheers Chris