Wednesday, March 8, 2017

The Tangelo

Tuesday 21st February
I remember holding the sticky juicy tangelo in my right hand.
As I peeled the skin off the shining orange tangelo I listened in closely and I heard a crispy kind of sound.
When I took my first bit warm sticky juice ran down my arm. Then I found a darkish grey pip, I rubbed my thumb over the pip.
It felt very smooth and calm.
As I finish the last segment I caught my eye on the bumpy skin, I took a slim small was very sourer and it didn't taste nice at all.

We had to write a descriptive piece of writing on a tangelo. I had to use all my five senses. I thought next time I could use some more similes and onomatopoeia.  

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